Torn Denims

June 27, 2013

 

Torn Denims
 

It was Christmas time

When the church bells chime

Gifts are yet to come

Incomplete for some

 

I was passing along the snowy street

Never expected we would meet

A mournful old man

With a support stick and a talisman

 

“Want some chocolate, sir?” I said

He smiled at me and revered

“Christmas is bright for all,

for me the world’s a gloomy hall”.

 

A glassy look he had

His situation worse and bad

He has no aims in life now

To work harder was his everyday vow

 

Begging was the only choice

No support, no voice

Mind was readjusting

Weak body unwilling

 

“The big man took it away

Now on the streets I lay

My family, my property, my everything

Never thought the horror he would bring”

 

Now I came to understand

He is duped with no land

No one to catch if he falls

Not even a place for nature’s call

 

I escorted him to my house

Gave him jacket and some gloves

What a friend was he

Sad to say “was”, you see

 

People on earth falsify

For money even tell lie

When would cheating come to an end

When would people learn to lend

 

Readers can find the solution

For people with that corrupt notion

Let’s be cautious and take vows

That’s our right we will surely espouse.

 

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By Prithvi S J Monteiro
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Comment on this article

  • cylma menezes, mangalore/bajpe

    Tue, Jul 23 2013

    hi prithvi...good job...lukn forward to read many more of ur wonderful works...best wishes from godseth, cylma, hershel nd hansel.

  • Shridhar K.V., Bangalore

    Wed, Jul 10 2013

    Great message. God work. God Bless You.

  • Kavya Krishnaraja , Mangalore

    Wed, Jul 10 2013

    Gr8 going boy.....very nice...good thought..!

  • Sheldon & Caroline, Urwa, Mangalore

    Mon, Jul 08 2013

    Superb! Fantabulous! Congrats to you from all our family members

  • Latha .S Upadhyaya, Mangalore

    Sat, Jul 06 2013

    Well done Prithvi.Aptly choosen theme for today.Meaningful and sweet poem.Keep it up and hope to read many more from you.

  • Molly Pinto, Mangalore/Australia

    Wed, Jul 03 2013

    Dear Prithvi wonderful poem.Keep writing more.you are blessed to have wonderful parents Ivan and Fatima,who nurture your talents.God has blessed you enormous talents.Good luck !

  • Smitha Roche, Mangalore

    Wed, Jul 03 2013

    Keep up the writing habit. May God bless you with more inspiration to continue the creative work.Wish you good luck.

  • sucharitha suresh, Mangalore

    Wed, Jul 03 2013

    good work prithvi... all the best keep it up

  • B.V.Kathyayani, Bejai

    Wed, Jul 03 2013

    Dear,

    It is wonderful, good work, keep it up. God bless you many more.

  • Percy saldanha, Amboli,Mumbai

    Wed, Jul 03 2013

    Great Work .... Keep up the good work.
    May God bless you

  • Rajesh, Brahmavara/UK

    Tue, Jul 02 2013

    Congrats Prithvi... May god bless you to achieve greater heights in your career. All the best.

  • Veera Dsouza(Gomes), Shivabagh, Mangalore

    Mon, Jul 01 2013

    Hi Prithvi..Nice poem. Congratulations! Keep it up.

  • Torn Denim, Mumbai

    Mon, Jul 01 2013

    Dear Prithvi,

    "You are Unique". It is clear God has graciously blessed you with an incredible talent to express to the world the teaching of his values, the focal point being selfless love and "You shall love your neighbor as yourself"

    Thank you and May God shower on you his grace and divine light to be the 'Salt" of the earth and "Light" of the world through your words as a unique gift for us. That we may understand it is not accomplishing great things that matters here on earth or in heaven but how we go about accomplishing them.

    Take care and Best wishes. Looking forward to receive your net poem in line. :))

  • Alwyn, Mangalore/Bangalore

    Sun, Jun 30 2013

    Dear Prithvi,

    Marvelous, Keep going. God bless you….

  • Kenny & Kate, Bejai, Mangalore

    Sun, Jun 30 2013

    Hey Prithvi,
    Congrats! Wonderful poem. Good Compilation. Wish you all the best. keep writing.God bless you.

  • Lancy Moras, Moushmi Creations

    Sun, Jun 30 2013

    Dear Prithvi,

    You are a wonderful boy with wonderful talent. Awesome each sentence u penned in this poem. Excellent spirit. Love u Baba..

    You are a proud son of your beloved parents.

    Dear Ivan, I am happy and proud of you. Kudos and take a bow SIR.

  • Steevan D'Souza, Farangipet / Dubai

    Sun, Jun 30 2013

    Hi Prithvi Baba,
    Very Nice Poem. Wish U All The Best. God bless you.

  • Maxim Rodrigues, Bondel

    Sun, Jun 30 2013

    Hi, Prithvi,
    well done liked your wonderful message to the society.god bless you.

  • Ankitha shetty, Manglore

    Sun, Jun 30 2013

    Hey prithvi,
    nice yaar... the poem is really inspiring.. keep on writting such inspiring poems...!!!!!!
    :-)

  • Brian Alphonso Dsouza, Urva/ Canada

    Sun, Jun 30 2013

    Hey!! I am proud of you prithu....My little brother..:)All the very best. I hope to read many more such poems from you and do us all proud..
    God Bless!!

  • Richard/Marina & fly, Mangalore/Muscat

    Sat, Jun 29 2013

    Hi Prithvi, wonderful poem, keep up your good work. Warm regards to your mom & dad.God bless.

  • Christy, Mangalore

    Sat, Jun 29 2013

    Hi Prithvi, Nice poem! Please keep writing. God bless you.

  • Herman, Mangalore

    Sat, Jun 29 2013

    From your lines, its clear to see
    You speak profound thoughts through poetry.
    Let nothing stop you, the world's your stage
    Brighten it putting pen to page.

  • Oliver, Bendur

    Sat, Jun 29 2013

    Hi Prithvi
    Very Good Poem keep it up and may god bless you same time dont forget our mai bas Konkanni.

  • Dave, Melbourne

    Sat, Jun 29 2013

    Good job !!keep it up. God bless u

  • Dr. Edward Lewis, Bejai, Mangalore

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    Good Efforts & excellent compilation.
    Wish you all the best for more.Keep going. God bless

  • ujwal, Mangalore

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    Good Efforts & excellent compilation.
    Wish you all the best for more.
    Ujwal

  • Godwin ,Plant-Tech India,

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    Hi prithvi,
    Gr8 poetry Keep it up.gr8 job man.

  • CGS, Mangalore

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    Congrats Prithvi,keep it up!

  • trescy lobo, urwa

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    good work, god bless

  • Donald Roche, Mangalore/Ruzai

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    Dear Prithvi, I have just read your poem 'Torn Denims'. I just wanted to tell you that you have amazing talent in poetry. This poem is a thought provoking one. Specifically the line "The big man took it away".... Who is he?.
    Thank you and keep these good poems coming.

  • Gerry D'Mello & fly, Bendur / Canada

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    Hi Prithvi,
    Wonderful poem. Keep-up you great poetic spirit. Thanks to your beloved parents Ivan & Fathima for their great support in your poetic journey! Great going Prithvi... we are proud of you!

  • Savitha, Mangalore

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    Good one Prithvi. A very good message through your poem.

  • Rohan Lawrence Sequeira, Bejai Mangalore

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    very Good Rhyme , good script
    with good message.
    Keep it up

  • Juliana D'costa , Aberdeen

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    Nice one Prithvi, touching message! Keep going. God bless .

  • rosy rodrigues, mangalore

    Fri, Jun 28 2013

    Great .... Keep up the good work.
    May God bless you

  • HARRY H DSOUZA, URWA .QATAR

    Thu, Jun 27 2013

    Hai prithvi
    well done my boy good script and a wonderfull message ot every one of us in todays world. Good work keep going and GOD bless u


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