My Fantasy

  •   Thu, Sep 22 2011
  •   By Naveen Menezes, Gurpur

September 23, 2011


My Fantasy

Each beautiful girl, I met

Arranged my heart, I set

Knowing not what really am

Love hence gladdened my game.


The age turns you around

Mind never calm and sound

No seriousness, mere run after fun

It’s teenage, oops... Already gone!


Seven stages in one’s life

All is well, that is what I tell

Teenage, still seems to be best

While away time, yet be more just.


In each day, as you play

Love needs to work all the way

That is life, with chuckles and smiles

Forget bad times, look for joys.


Love rocks between mankind

Lest, sure fight... Communal riot

Here and there strikes, protest

Wow! How nice, again holiday fest!
By Naveen Menezes, Gurpur
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Comment on this article

  • Louvely, Jorgy Pais

    Sun, Oct 02 2011

    Bevtiful poyeum.

  • Joseph Naveen, Gurpur

    Sat, Oct 01 2011

    To All readers,
    Big Thanks to all of you for the comment and compliments. To those known and unknown people. Thanks to Daijiworld.

  • Kiran Mendonca, Kaikamba

    Thu, Sep 29 2011

    Nice One Naveen ..Keep writing...you will be the Emerging poet ..

  • denzil jaison fernandes, mangalore

    Mon, Sep 26 2011

    its really heart touching poem. dear naveen i wish that good and best poems flow from your pen and that may help us readers to enjoy along with you. all the best friend.

  • santhu, mangalore

    Mon, Sep 26 2011

    hey mr naveen , good poem, i liked it.. good luck.. keep writting okie...

  • Anju, Mangalore

    Mon, Sep 26 2011

    good one joseph! thought provokin!

  • Ziad, Gurpur/Bangalore

    Sun, Sep 25 2011

    hi Naveen.... nice one re.... im still remember our chidhood games n fun.... you have gud talent, u go ahead with same spirit...

    still im rememeber with you in Bandashale,heart touching msgs,lot of fun,cricket.....need re dat childhood again!!!!

  • Sequeira Jaison, Gurpur

    Sun, Sep 25 2011

    good poem...but as a friend i would like you to write better and more...so here are some points which i collected from the workshops which i attended on literature(konkani)...
    your words do touch , but connection between the stanzas is needed more , good attempt rhyming the words , the best part is the depiction of the teen thought has come out really good ...take this positively...and reach great heights...and one thing above all-"Art cannot be judged, but can be justified"...

  • Imran Kaup, Dubai

    Sat, Sep 24 2011

    Bro ! Nice one .. I luv it .. keep going !

  • Fasila, Mangalore

    Sat, Sep 24 2011

    I liked how the poem touched various aspects in just a few words. Keep writing and keep publishing :)

  • Ruth, M'lore

    Sat, Sep 24 2011

    Gud1 Joseph!!...keep writin..

  • Daniel Pinto, Bahrain / Gurpur

    Sat, Sep 24 2011

    Gud one Naveen.. Keep Going.. All the very Best..

  • Godwin Dsouza, mangalore

    Sat, Sep 24 2011

    Well done bro... very nice poem.......

  • megha, mangalore

    Sat, Sep 24 2011

    really gud....keep up da gud job..

  • Anjana George, Kerala

    Sat, Sep 24 2011

    Beautiful :)

  • jackson george d'sa, kuwait

    Fri, Sep 23 2011

    Naveen , very very nice poem. keep writing..... ur poem thouched the heart.

  • Zeena, M'lore/dubai

    Fri, Sep 23 2011

    good one bro keep writing......good luck......

  • James Dsouza , Gurpur kaikamba

    Fri, Sep 23 2011

    Good one Naveen.keep it up,keep writing.

  • Glenn, mangalore

    Fri, Sep 23 2011

    Nys One Naveen...keep going....All d best....

  • Jaison Suraj, Abu Dhabi/Gurpur

    Fri, Sep 23 2011

    Naveen, very nice poem which captures the feelings.... Keep writing bro... God Bless u.

  • tauseef, mangalore

    Fri, Sep 23 2011

    gud one bro...keep writing...

  • Sylvia, Kinnigoli

    Thu, Sep 22 2011

    Hey Joseph
    Nice one


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