She's My Roommate....

  •   Sun, Dec 26 2010
  •   By Sylvia Navina Lobo, Kinnigoli

Dec 27, 2010


She’s my damn good roommate
She met me at her ugly fate
Tough competitor to Hudson Kate
Don’t wanna lose her at any rate

She walks like a steady stream
Every young man’s unreachable dream
Her skin's like smooth, shiny dove cream
Scared of cockroach good with loud scream.

Black little eyes that never lie
Quiet high goals reaching the sky
Beautiful, pretty like an apple pie
Famous with her Shetty sigh

With mischievous kids, very much handy
Adores actors, all time favorite ‘V’ channel Andy
Loves ice-cream, never misses Amul candy
To conclude with, she’s a perfect lady.

 

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Comment on this article

  • Samson, Chennai

    Sat, Jan 08 2011

  • Samson, Chennai

    Sat, Jan 08 2011

    Nice one to start with bo.. Nice use of words.
    Suggestion: Avoid too many rhymes.
    N I hope ur room mate thinks something similar about you.

  • Sandeep Kini, Mangalore

    Fri, Dec 31 2010

    Beautiful Poem :)

  • rita, mangalore

    Wed, Dec 29 2010

    lovely poem... looking foward to hear more lovely poems..

  • shilpa, bangalore

    Tue, Dec 28 2010

    that was wonderful.. wonder whr u get all such words outta ur head!!
    that was amazing.. keep on ur good work!!


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