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| By Dillon Monis - UK |
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Sep 14, 2009
This edition we shall read a poem on football, which is one of the favourite games of nine-year old Dillon Brian Monis. Dillon lives in the U.K. and studies in the fourth standard at St. Gilda's Catholic School. Mum Lucy and Dad Denis originally hail from Madanthyar and hope this published item will boost Dillon's confidence to write more.
We hope the same Dillon and wish you all the best. Well done.
Before I take your leave, thanks to all the parents who make a special point to thank me and Daijiworld for this column. It's indeed a joy for me to see the comments and the encouragement that our kids receive. I read them all and hope you do the same.
Sophia Rodrigues
Editor - Kids ARENA
FOOTBALL
By Dillon Monis - UK (9-year-old)
When the lightening flashes,
The excited boy zooms through the field, but crashes.
Suddenly he roared amazingly loudly "look at me",
But he forgets the cheerful crowd can't see !
Soon the crowd start to cheer,
Then the people on the pitch really can't hear !
As the team gain possession,
You can see their happy expression.
The boy kicks the ball as hard as a rock,
Then someone in the crowd gets an electric shock.
The second half beginds with a quiet noise,
Soon the away team have some poise.
as quick as a flash, a boy runs with exhilarating pace,
Then someone on the pitch forgets to tie their lace !
Suddenly Robin ploughs through the field with the ball,
He has to face a man who's six foot tall.
The whistle is now blowing,
The lights in the stadium are still glowing.
Note to the readers:
Kids Arena column open for below 18-year-old. You can send your articles, stories, poems, or any creatives along with your brief introduction and picture to below email:
kids@daijiworld.com
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| Comments on this article |
| Jithu, Uk, Yeovil Somerset | Wednesday, March 02, 2011 |
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| I thought that it was really quite a magnificent piece, i am guessing it would need more of a thriller touch as in making it more exciting by adding in metaphors like ' the crowd roared giving the person the anonimous amount of courage to move forth and phases quick with wind and though giving it a an electric boost in his shot' or something much shorter ' goal being scored in the movement of an electric current. |
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| Amanda Rodrigues, Goa/USA | Sunday, March 21, 2010 |
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Hai Dillon,
Wonderful poem! We're so proud of you. You are a very smart kid. Congratulations!
How are mummy and daddy? Say hai to Lucy and Denis.
OK then Bai. Keep up the good work!
Regards,
Amanda Aunty
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| A.A.Khan, | Tuesday, December 01, 2009 |
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| Very well written keep it up Dillon good work keep writing,God bless you Great poem Dillon! How is your family..? and u? |
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| A.A.Khan, | Thursday, December 03, 2009 |
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| Very well written .Keep it up Dillon good work keep writing,God bless you Great poem. |
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| Philip D''Souza, Kumta, Karnataka | Thursday, September 17, 2009 |
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| Master Dillon keep it up! May God Bless you! |
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| A.Jermine, U.Godfrey and family, Sydney, Australia | Wednesday, September 16, 2009 |
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| keep it up Dillon!Wish you all the best in your creative writing. Regards to all at home. |
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| stanley, Manipal/Mangalore | Tuesday, September 15, 2009 |
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| Good one keep it up stan |
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| Cyril Moras & fly , Siddakatte/Madikeri | Tuesday, September 15, 2009 |
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| Hai Dillon, You are a good football player! arn''t you? We have watched your game when we visited your place (U.K.) last! The wonderful poem composed by you really shows your interest in the game and it shows how talented boy you are! Congratulations. "The ladder of success is best climbed by stepping on the rungs of opportunity" Make use of every opportunity, the success will be yours. We all love you! God bless you. |
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| SANDRA D''SOUZA, Manipal | Tuesday, September 15, 2009 |
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| Hello Dillon Good Poem. I wish you all the best. |
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| VINOD WIFLRED TAURO & FLY, MADANTHYAR,DUBAI | Monday, September 14, 2009 |
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| Very well written and keep it up... Keep your spirit in writing and I wish you all the best... regards to you Dennis and Lucy WILFY,JANET,VIJETHA & VIVECA |
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| Brisna, Australia | Monday, September 14, 2009 |
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| Great poem Dillon! How is your family..? |
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| Jawar D''Souza, M''lore/Doha | Monday, September 14, 2009 |
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| Very well written keep it up Dillon good work keep writing,God bless you. |
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| Jawar D''Souza, M''lore/Doha | Monday, September 14, 2009 |
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| Very well written keep it up Dillon good work keep writing,God bless you. |
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| violita, madanthyar | Monday, September 14, 2009 |
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| well done dillon you may not know me you were very small when I came to salalah. but I have not forgotten you and your mom and dad. Congratulations well done keep it up. congrats to both of you dennu dattu and lucy |
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