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April 8, 2010
We meet a very talented little girl in this edition – Fay Stephanie D’Souza. Fay is eight years old and lives in Melbourne, Australia with her parents and two younger siblings. She is in grade four at St Kevin’s Catholic Primary School.
Dad Stephen originally hails from Kadri and mum Anita is originally from Kulshekar.
Fay has a collection of poems which she has been composing since a very young age, and today she shares four such poems with us. Apart from composing a poem, Fay enjoys drawing and painting the ideas on which her poems are based. And not only that, Fay has the ability of reciting poems extempore.
Fay’s other interests include reading, story-writing and story-telling, swimming and music. Fay is also a good compere.
You are really gifted Fay, keep building on your talents and make us all proud. God Bless.
Sophie Rodrigues
Editor - Kids Arena
Kittens
Fay Stephanie D’Souza
Kittens are soft, loving, cute and purry
But mostly they are furry!
Kittens are cuddly, puddly, friendly and sweet
And most of all, they like a little treat!
[composed at age four]
Dance to the Beat
Come on be a star
You are good so far
Hang on every note
With your rocking coat
Try to make a style
Come on, use your smile
Come on, strike a pose
Keeping high your nose
Don’t you feel the heat?
Come on! Dance to the beat.
[composed at age five]
When the sun goes down…
When the sun goes down and it’s the end of the day
Two little children would like to play
All they do is play all night
They could not get sleep from the moon-light
In the early morning time to awake
They’re already fast asleep by the lake
They got sick from the bugs on the floor
Now they’ll sleep outside no more.
[composed at age six]
God’s world
Wow! Look at the happy world - there’s lot of fresh air,
Look at the big rainbow glinting over there
See the little bees having a big parade
Oh! What a lovely world God has made.
Look at the children smiling in a good way
Oh! it’s just a wonderful day.
Hear the chirping birds singing a song
Oh! let every one smile all along.
See the puppy giggle and bark
Look at the great bright blue shark
Look at the fine men set sail
Look at the big blue whale!
[composed at age seven for her religion homework]
Note to the readers:
Kids Arena column open for below 18-year-old. You can send your articles, stories, poems, or any creatives along with your brief introduction and picture to below email:
kids@daijiworld.com
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| Sunita D'Silva, Bangalore | Friday, May 07, 2010 |
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Dear Fay,
Congratulations,you have richly captured the nature and happiness around you in your poems. Keep it up.
Sunita mousi. |
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| Arun D'Silva Rajpal, Kulshekar, Bangalore | Friday, April 30, 2010 |
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CONGRATULATIONS FAY may god bless you, carry on the good work you are really talented. I know you are a good artist also. All the best.
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| Ravi Lobo, Kinnigoli/ Wisconsin | Wednesday, April 21, 2010 |
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Hello Fay,
Usually I don’t read poems. They are too difficult for me. However, I loved your poems. They are very nice and beautifully written. The choice of words is very good. If you continue like this, soon you will become a great poet.
Keep writing. All the best.
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| Iris, Mangalore/Canada | Saturday, April 17, 2010 |
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Dear Fay,
You write very well. Every poem has a freshness about it. Make use of your wonderful talent to make others happy around you, all your life.
love,
Iris, Pradeep and Nisya |
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| sunil, ABUDHABI | Saturday, April 17, 2010 |
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| FAY,a wonderful collection.keep it up.congratulation for your collections |
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| Alwyn, alwyn, Mangalore | Thursday, April 15, 2010 |
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Dear Fay
Congratulations, good poems, keep it up... many more.. in the coming days... all the best.
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| Fay Stephanie D'Souza, Melbourne | Tuesday, April 13, 2010 |
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| Many thanks to you all for your words of encouragement and appreciation. It means a lot. I will do my best to keep it up. |
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| DILLON , UK | Tuesday, April 13, 2010 |
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| Well done on those brilliant poems and keep writing. |
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| Meghna Kamath, Mangalore | Tuesday, April 13, 2010 |
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| Way to go Fay! All the very best. |
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| Lourdina, Mangalore/Melbourne | Monday, April 12, 2010 |
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Dear Fay, Congratulations and Well done. You are good, keep it up. With Blessings.
Lourdina Aunty |
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| patrick d'souza, mangalore neermarga | Monday, April 12, 2010 |
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| Congratulations Fay. Keep it up! |
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| Alzira, Mangalore/Melbourne, Australia | Sunday, April 11, 2010 |
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Dearest Fay,
You are a rising talent on the poetic horizon. Congratulations & God bless!!!!
Continue to wield the pen with your beautiful poems. We need a talented poet/poetesses like you !
Alzira |
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| Anil John Karvallo, Basrur, Abu Dhabi | Sunday, April 11, 2010 |
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| Congratulations. Keep it up. God Bless You. Compose some devotion songs also. |
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| Reshma, Dubai | Saturday, April 10, 2010 |
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| Wonderful Collection. Each poem is so different and so meaningful. Early signs of great things to come. |
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| Anil D'souza, mumbai/Dubai | Saturday, April 10, 2010 |
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Dear Fay,
Congratulations! awaiting your next collection.
Anil |
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| JOVIN, SHIRVA | Saturday, April 10, 2010 |
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| Small but terrible. I like your Poem God's world. Can you imagine how much God happy to see that poem from a little heart. Wish that you will write more poems for Jesus and spread the Good News of jesus in your Poems. God bless you sweet heart. Be a loving daughter to your Parents always. |
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| Juon, AbuDhabi | Saturday, April 10, 2010 |
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Dear Fay,
Nice to see your poems in Daijiworld. Did hear a lot of your wonderful talents. We are proud to have a budding poet and compere in our family. May God bless you and guide you towards more success and bright future.... All the best
Simon Uncle, Juliet Aunty, Reisha and Reola |
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| NaazEden, Mangalore/Saudi Arabia | Saturday, April 10, 2010 |
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| Wow cute poem from Fay!!! Keep up baby your talents. May you become a good poet in Future Take Crae All The Best... |
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| Wilson D'souza, Udupi | Friday, April 09, 2010 |
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| Keep going. Don't let your talents down. Congratulations in advance for you will succeed. Best of luck baby. God Bless you.. |
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| prince, podikambla/dubai | Friday, April 09, 2010 |
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| Nice and cute poem from Fay!!! keep writing...God bless you and your parents. Wishing you all the best for your future endeavoures. |
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| Antony Crasta, Mangalore/Sydney Australia | Thursday, April 08, 2010 |
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| I enjoyed reading your poems, Fay, which are full of rhythm and symmetry - simply beautiful - you have plenty of talents and potential to be a poet and/or writer. Keep going and wish you well. By the way, lovely hair style and smile! |
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| Sneha Ullal, Mangalore | Thursday, April 08, 2010 |
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| Great work Fay. Keep it up! |
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| Michael Gregory Tauro , Alangar moodbidri kadalakere | Thursday, April 08, 2010 |
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| Dear Fay keep it up your Talent beautiful poems. one of reader Michael Gregory Tauro Moodbidri. |
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| VVN & ALPEES UNCLE, ABUDHABI | Thursday, April 08, 2010 |
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| Dear Fay Congratulations, We Read your Beautiful Poems, Go Ahead... Best of Luck Bye .... VVn & Alpees. |
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| Santosh, Mangalore/US | Thursday, April 08, 2010 |
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Hail to the poet laureatte. We would like to see more of these wonderful creations.
Santosh uncle |
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| prashanth, Dubai/mlore | Thursday, April 08, 2010 |
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very cute poems and smile.
keep it up Stephanie D’Souza...
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| Praveen D Silva, Kulshekar | Thursday, April 08, 2010 |
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Dear Fay,
Congratulations Fay, I am proud of you indeed! Congratulations to your parents and teachers who have encouraged you to write such beautiful poetry. Keep up your talents. May you become a good poet. God bless you.
Praveen. |
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