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My Mother's Magical Smile |
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| Giselle Maryanne Fernandes, Mumbai |
August 16, 2012
My Mother's Magical Smile

As the blanket of darkness begins to cover the sky, Eyes buried in tears greet me all while, Every passing moment just becomes another reason to cry, And somehow I forget how to smile.
As the stars twinkle away to glory, I wait in despair for the kind touch that prays, For a gentle whisper in my ears saying sorry, Is all I need for the memories to fade away!
At the corner I see my mother with a quiet smile, It feels like a ray of light, It changes darkness into hope all while, When she kisses away my tears and holds me with love so bright.
As the day dawns and unfolds its share of shambles, I now carry courage that never lets me sigh, For my mother’s gentle smile wiped away my tremble, And gave hope that promises to never fade nor die!
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| Comments on this article |
| cifha c dias, barkur | Friday, August 31, 2012 |
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Nice one Giselle.. keep writting.. god bless |
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| SUDESH KUMAR, MANGALORE/MYSORE | Sunday, August 26, 2012 |
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Congratulations Giselle. Nice poem,Keep writing.
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| Agnello, Mangalore/Muscat | Sunday, August 26, 2012 |
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Touching.Beautifully written in classic style. And it seems she has passed on the inheritance too :) |
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| Mike, Toronto | Tuesday, August 21, 2012 |
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| Congratulations, Good job. |
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| Frenny Fernandes, Urwa / Dubai | Sunday, August 19, 2012 |
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Dear Giselle,
Wah ! what a lovely poem !! A Mother is she who can take the place of all others but whose place no one else can take. She is a priceless blessing and a symbol of selfless love. Yes, your mother has a magical smile and beautiful nature too. Nice family picture. God Bless you. Keep writing.
Love Frenny and puri paltan
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| Pearl D'Souza, mangalore | Sunday, August 19, 2012 |
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| Very nice giselle.. very heart touching poem.. |
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| M.SHAMEEM ANSARI, BANGALORE | Saturday, August 18, 2012 |
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HI DEAR GISELLE IT IS A BEAUTIFUL FEELING , A BEAUTIFUL WORD , A BEAUTIFUL POEM , A BEAUTIFUL CHARACTER TO PORTRAY. MOTHER IS THE BIGGEST GIFT OF GOD TO ALL HUMAN BEING BELIEVE IT OR NOT SHE IS THE REAL QUEEN SHE PROTECT HER CHILD AND NOT MEAN.. I LOVE MY MOM A LOT.. |
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| Capt.Arul Aranha, Mangalore/Brasil | Friday, August 17, 2012 |
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Hi Giselle, Congratulations! A beautiful one. Let more keep coming! All the best. |
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| Edward Joe, Mangalore | Friday, August 17, 2012 |
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| Hi, dear Giselle, Excellent poem, touching words. God Bless and keep smiling. Beautiful Picture. |
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| jacintha, Mangalore | Friday, August 17, 2012 |
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Very very touching poem, God Bless. Keep writing dear and keep your smiles. Love /Jacintha |
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| Sharath, Mangalore | Friday, August 17, 2012 |
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| Nice poem. Keeping writing Giselle. |
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| Sharol Rodrigues, Kulshekar, Mangalore | Friday, August 17, 2012 |
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| Hey Giselle nice one. :) |
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| Clifford Fernandes, Mumbai | Friday, August 17, 2012 |
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| Pleasant surprise.Well done Giselle.Keep going. |
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| Mujeeb Ahmed, Kasaragod | Friday, August 17, 2012 |
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Nice words. Well depicted. Along with the magical smile, every mother holds a single emotion. Love, love and love only. Hats off to motherhood. Wishes for d beautiful family as well. |
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| Candle, Mangalore | Friday, August 17, 2012 |
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| Happy family with great beautiful smile.I remember here saying "SMILE AND THE WORLD WILL SMILE AT YOU" Good poem. You are a good writer keep writing. Your dad has beautiful smile, but you have not given any credit to his smile in your poem. It's not fair.Next poem you must dedicate to your dad. |
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| alban lewis, Kallianpur/bangalore | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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Poor papa I like that smile as good as mother's But man's smile cannot be as tender and refreshing as the mother's but it can take the child 'miles |
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| Meena Pinto, Mangalore, | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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Nice poem,Keep writing.
Love
Meena pinto |
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| kirthan rodrigues & Fly., Mangalore / Doha Qatar | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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| Excellent article giselle. Keep writing. |
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| DONY LOBO, MILAGRES, DOHA, QATAR | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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| Nice tribute with touching words to a great Mother with all the three daughters look alike so much so very difficult to spot as to who is Giselle among them....I wish everyone reads this tribute....there are lots of good things to learn from them...God Bless the parents who have brought up these true and affectionate siblings in such a dignified way. |
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| Stephen, mangalore / Dubai | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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| gud 1 |
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| Richard Dsouza, Mumbai/Bindra Complex | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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| Nice one. Keep writing, All the best. Keep smiling |
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| venkatakrishna rao , Mangalore | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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| good One gissele...Congrats |
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| Sr Juliet SRA, Vamanjoor | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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| Congratulations Giselle. Good poem. Keep writing. |
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| Carolyn, Mangalore | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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Nice one Giselle, keep writing. All the very Best.
Love/ Carol. |
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| vincent, Mangalore | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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| Nice poem, Giselle. keep writing, nice to see entire family. All the best |
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| R.Bhandarkar., M | Thursday, August 16, 2012 |
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Very touching. Give some thought to 'Paapa'also dear....For he does the 'miles' to keep your 'smiles'- right? Very obvious... |
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