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| By Arun Prakash D'Souza |
May 25, 2012
The End

At the sunrise of our lives, I saw in ‘her’ eyes- Her green radiating eyes, The world of my dreams: The dreams of my world! Not a mirage, nor an illusion, The skies were bright - clearer; And clouds seemed no more- Deep blue horizon inviting- Both of us, to join hand in hand: To play, to sing and to dance, With no fear of anyone! Again her green eyes shone, The rays of hope and love: The message of freedom- Lines from within her heart: “We are made for each other” And of course, we were so! But alas! End was not too far- The sun had an early death, At the sunset of her life: The skies were girdled with- The sooty - satanic clouds, Deep blue horizon no more- Just a mirage, only an illusion; And then I saw in her eyes- Her dark - dull - feeble eyes, The broken world -- but not of my dreams! The shattered dreams -- yet not of my world!!
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| Comments on this article |
| Amabilis, | Wednesday, May 30, 2012 |
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Hi Arun, Great! very nice, wow! so are a poet.. keep it up. take care God bless you. |
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| wilma, mangalore | Tuesday, May 29, 2012 |
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| Well expressed poem. continue to do so. |
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| clerita, pangla/Bhopal | Tuesday, May 29, 2012 |
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Dear Arun, Congatulation.keep it up.god bless you .
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| Yoshi, | Monday, May 28, 2012 |
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| Arun! Amazing. I like your poem!! |
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| Lance D' Costa, Mangalore / Abu Dhabi | Monday, May 28, 2012 |
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| A good poem.....how the dreams get shattered, so nicely expressed..Keep writing Arun !! |
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| Lavina & Stella,Mangalore, Mangalore | Saturday, May 26, 2012 |
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Hi Brother, Superb... expressions, We liked your poem. Congrats.... |
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| alwin, nakre/uae | Saturday, May 26, 2012 |
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| Lovely expressions..Fr.Arun keep it up |
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| Vinitha Britto, Kanajar/Dubai | Saturday, May 26, 2012 |
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| Good one Arun, Keep it up. |
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| Melwin Pinto , Mangalore/ Rome | Saturday, May 26, 2012 |
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| Lovely expressions... Never knew you could be poetic... I like the mystery that surrounds the person... Congrats! |
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| Brian SJ, Bangalore | Saturday, May 26, 2012 |
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| Good one Arun. Enjoyed reading it! |
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| Rudy Almeida, Nakre Karkala | Saturday, May 26, 2012 |
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Hi Arun, i really liked ur poem, it is an AWESOME poem. keep up the GREAT WORk... |
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| Norbert Sequeira, Mumbai | Saturday, May 26, 2012 |
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Phew !!! Awesome - beautiful lines ARUN.
You shared your inner thoughts, 'her green eyes' HaH !!! has sunken me tooo.
What a God we have. His Creation, His Beauty, His Majestic Architechture.
Only a few to appreciate.
Thank you DAIJIWORLD, for encouraging Poets like Arun.
God bless you all.
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| Asuntha D'souza, ,Nakre /Muscat | Saturday, May 26, 2012 |
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| nice one dear brother....keep it up |
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| Praveen R Rodrigues, Mangalore | Saturday, May 26, 2012 |
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Hi Arun, Good Thinking but Who is she ? |
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| Helen B.Nazareth, Ferar/Mangalore/Mumbai | Friday, May 25, 2012 |
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Good to see you in Daijiworld and read your poem. Looking forward for more poems/stories as well as place of your visits narrating the story. Helen.
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| Daniel D'Sa, Nitte/Mumbai | Friday, May 25, 2012 |
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| Good creative poetry and meaningful, dear Arun |
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| Ranjan Castelino, Nakre/Bangalore | Friday, May 25, 2012 |
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Dear Arun,
Nice to see your poem. keep it up |
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